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Happy Nielsen's avatar

It’s sad to hear that these experiences came from your real life in many ways, but it was so real and vivid that it is the only thing that makes sense. I’m so glad you shared this story with us, it’s going to stick with me for a long time 🎡

Andrew Thomas's avatar

You are so sweet ❤️. Thank you

Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

I'm extremely sorry about the experiences you made. I'm quite certain that this story will stick with me for a while, especially since everything was so vivid and tangible. The emotions really got to me. Probably one of the stories on here that touched me the most as I followed it along.

Andrew Thomas's avatar

This means so much. Thanks so much for reading, for the kind words, and for sharing my work!

Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

You’re absolutely welcome! Thank you for sharing it with us 💛

Jay Wilcox's avatar

The ending works so well. Having Justin live deepens Jack's new appreciation for life, as opposed to just having more tragedy. As I noted in another comment, I literally finished this story with my mouth hanging open

Thank you for your afterword, too. It's good to hear your thoughts and process, and I sincerely congratulate you on getting this done and out there. Cheers!

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Andrew Thomas's avatar

Thank you ❤️❤️