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"Then an idea struck him. Jack stood up and went to the water’s edge and walked ten or twelve feet to the right, taking care to plant his feet at different distances from the water until the sand turned to more of a muck and then eventually grass. He bent over and looked at the various footprints he had just left. None of them much looked like what he had seen by the creek, but that was a creek, and this was a beach."

I love this--a smart character with a good, scientific idea. Moments like this counteract the whole "Why would they split up?"/"Why would they go in the obviously dangerous haunted house?" questions we find ourselves asking with so many horror stories. Jack's smart enough to test his hypothesis, to think rationally, and this is so important to a good story. This proves to us that, if there's a problem, he's reasonably capable of solving it, which makes it impossible not to root for him here.

Ugh. Nerding out a bit over here lol

As always, great setting. Great vibe. I'm genuinely unsettled by the scratching

Happy Nielsen's avatar

Can’t believe I missed so many postings!! Binging this is fun though! 🦶

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