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Happy Nielsen's avatar

I’m almost jealous of you?! The way my jaw droppeddddd

I love seeing him angry ngl it’s about time he shows some emotion instead of pretending everything is ok 😢

Andrew Thomas's avatar

Right?! I remember when that line hit me and I was like…holy shit this is what I’ve been waiting for! Let’s get out of town already!

Happy Nielsen's avatar

It was SO good. Because someone would totally be that much of a dumbass

Andrew Thomas's avatar

I have to admit, it means a lot to hear that. I’ve long wondered “would someone be that dumb?” but honestly, I think it could happen. Far fetched but not impossible. And this is FICTION after all, people!

Happy Nielsen's avatar

No I think you portrayed exactly the careless way people forget what other people are going through! Not out of cruelty, just idiocy and not thinking before speaking. That punch was satisfyingggg

Jay Wilcox's avatar

“In a way, I’m a bit jealous of you,” Vic said, almost in passing. “I wish I had a good excuse to start over right about now.”

I gasped.

The dialogue, as always, is on point. Damn

Andrew Thomas's avatar

Man thanks for the dialogue comment. I always wonder how my dialogue comes across.

Marilyn Bogle's avatar

Another great segment!

Andrew Thomas's avatar

Thank you! It’s about to get interesting :)